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poetry by smalltownsillygal




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You realize she did not even exist,

Though her beauty you could not resist.

On finding her you used to insist,

But she kept disappearing in the mist.

 

When your muse came around,

In your heart she made a wound,

And you wrote to the one you love.

You asked for aid from the angels above.

 

With dark nights you got along,

They kept singing you their songs,

You penned them down one by one,

They were about your special someone.

 

Alas, it is all left in the past:

Your feelings for her could not last.

You forgot her very fast.

You lost a dream that was so vast.

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poeknowsprose Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
This was a good poem about passion and how quickly it can come and fade away. Well done.
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Zakemur Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
thank you.
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MariaB9 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"With dark nights you got along,

They kept singing you their songs,"
I love those lines and this poem is wonderful. I love how it shows how powerful our love can be for someone, but then we forget it like it has never happened.
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Zakemur Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Thank you!
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