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Cannot promise to say what exactly I will be posting, but once I get the inspiration I will definitely start making wonders with this mind of mine.
I thought he did not exist until I saw a sleigh flying over the roof of my house. 

 My room's a mess, my mind is sore,

I cannot think clearly anymore,

Instead of a heart there is a hole,

And I just sit around, staring at the wall.

 

The clock is ticking, but there’s no action,

And there is no utter satisfaction,

There is nothing  to the world I can show,

I let myself completely go…

 

I want to live, not just exist,

I do not wish to lose myself in this mist,

I need to inhale the cold winter air,

And exhale all the despair!



How many days more to lose,

Is this what I choose?

I am wasting all this precious time,

To waste it all would be a crime,

I should go out and make a dime,

But then who will write this dark rhyme?

Something was once beating,

That does not exist,

Something that was needing,

But now does not resist.

 

Something that was once dreaming,

Now all it does is think,

Something that found in all a meaning,

But now they disappear with one  blink.

 

A heart that is far away in the stars,

And a mind that is down to earth,

How did I lose you all?

Maybe I did not survive the fall

 

 A metal man, no longer for anything I grieve,

I am done, there is nothing in my sleeve,

Just walking like a tin man,

Of the vast emptiness I am a fan.

Cannot promise to say what exactly I will be posting, but once I get the inspiration I will definitely start making wonders with this mind of mine.

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Zakemur
Murad
United States
Hello, my name is Murad and I'm originally from Azerbaijan,but now I live in Kansas. I'm an aspiring writer. I have been publishing my works on many other websites since 2010. I write poems, stories, fanficts and ect. I also like music and drawing(despite the fact that i'm bad at it)
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Autumflowers Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful works, wonders writing. Poems never really did it for me, they seemed to forced when i wroth them. i love yours though ~ 
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Zakemur Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014
Thank you very much for your kind words
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Autumflowers Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Of course- i can learn so much from you and i look forward to it :3
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CrazyMai Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student Writer
I just found your profile and I enjoy your writing style. Unfortunately, I haven't had enough time yet to go through all your works but I'll definetely do it another time :)
Keep it up!
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Zakemur Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Thanks
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CrazyMai Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Student Writer
You are welcome :)
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TheLibertasLeague Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for joining <a  href="epicmuse.deviantart.com">EpicMuse!
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F4TH0M Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the fave :)
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Zakemur Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
You are welcome!
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BrighterHeart Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You write beautifully.
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